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02-05-2012, 02:57 PM #1Soldier
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02-06-2012, 06:52 PM #2Soldier
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I like your flow and this is a beast instrumental. Overall 9/10 good rhymes, good job.
Shawty said the nigga that she with ain’t shit Shawty said the nigga that she with ain’t this Shawty said the nigga that she with can't hit But shawty I'ma hit it, hit it like I can't miss.
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02-08-2012, 01:49 AM #3Soldier
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thanks man i sappreciate that
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Great instrumental choice......honestly I really enjoyed this shit....your flow is a little choppy...but it wasnt bad enough to turn me off...your lyrics is probably the weakest part......I expected some dope old school hip hop shit on this....but overall a good attempt........keep rapping you got potential.....
Deliver 3/5
Lyrics 2.5/5
Flow 2.5/5
Overall 2.8/5Mississippi x California x North Carolina
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Re: zaye - new wu freestyle
I dig it; recording is rough, but you got a nice presence on the mic and those little doubles you've got in there are sick. Some of the flow needs some tightening up like on the phrases "man these haters can get bars like childs on mars" and "my uncle told me rep that dog where-ever....i go", overall it's definitely not bad but could be cleaned up a bit; keep at it though man, better than a lot of other stuff I hear
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i jus wanna thank everyone who listened and showed feedback it means alot
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