Cas - Faded freestyle

[__cas__]

Not sure why my first thread got deleted, if I'm not following the rules let me know.

What's up guys. Check out my freestyle to faded by Tyga.


Link: Fadedmaster by CasBenJayMelf on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free


Feedback 1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post773829

Feedback 2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post773827

[mykill]

it got deleted because you didnt read the rules lol. but thank you for taking the time to read em and get right. CHECK THIS ONE OUT PPL!

EDIT: Flow and delivery is pretty ill. Wat kind of mic do you use? What program? if that mic work got a bit clearer, this would be almost official.

[__cas__]

Thanks man. I use a Rode NT2A condenser mic (like the one in the carter doc) and I got that hooked up to an mbox pro 3. I'm feeding the mic right into fl studio where I do the vocal effects. It's come along way since I started a few months ago, but yeah I'm still learning. Thanks a lot for the review!

[Zukko]

Good job dude. You could improve your vocal tone but that's the only flaw i can find. Apart from that, sick flow and there were some dope lines. Nice track

[KidComet]

Need some improvement on word pronunciation.

[__cas__]

Good job dude. You could improve your vocal tone but that's the only flaw i can find. Apart from that, sick flow and there were some dope lines. Nice track

Thanks alot bro!

Need some improvement on word pronunciation.

Yeah only took a few takes of it I could have perfected it a bit more. Thanks for the feedback.

[DatWeezy]

This dope bro, I feel like the vocals are a lil to loud. Idk maybe it's just me?

Lyrics were pretty dope and your flow was ill as fuck. Keep up fam...

3/5

[Sentus]

The flow is the best part on this, it definitely stands out. Your delivery is pretty good, but the mixing hinders it a bit. You could get better quality out of your vocals if you try harder. Lyrics were boring and the rhyme schemes were even more boring. If your going to do that style at least get creative with it. You have the flow/delivery part down so you sound good you just need to perfect the other part of rapping.

[Gibbsy]

Digging the beat, nice chill sorta budd smoking joint lol,
flow is tight kinda reminds me a lil of paul wall aha, nice work man keep dropping!!

4/5

[cGrumm]

+: Flow was good, at first i didnt think delivery was gonna be good, but after the first couple lines you picked it up. A lot of fire lines. Your voice was good for this beat in my opinion. Ending was good
-: sounded a little too loud.
Overall: 4/5 good work do your thing man.

[__cas__]

Thanks for the feedback everybody, means alot!

[Quil]

I fux wit this heave

4.5/10

sick flow and delivery. lyrics were on point as well. looking forward to hearing more.