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02-07-2012, 08:44 PM #1Captain
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Club Paradise Remix ( opinions please)
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02-07-2012, 11:02 PM #2Tha Studio Mod
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Re: Club Paradise Remix ( opinions please)
you should read the studio rules...
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02-08-2012, 02:13 PM #3Captain
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Re: Club Paradise Remix ( opinions please)
What's wrong with it?
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02-08-2012, 02:15 PM #4Sergeant
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Re: Club Paradise Remix ( opinions please)
Not bad, need to work on your grammar doe!
The murder man, picture me lurkin
Right up behind ya curtains nine's squirtin
And you could hear it when it's hurtin
But if I hear him hurtin I'll walk over and murk him for certain
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02-08-2012, 07:22 PM #5Captain
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Re: Club Paradise Remix ( opinions please)
thanks for the feedback.
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02-08-2012, 07:51 PM #6Captain
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Re: Club Paradise Remix ( opinions please)
Need to stay on beat imo and work on flow and delivery :p
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02-09-2012, 01:25 PM #7Soldier
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Re: Club Paradise Remix ( opinions please)
Work on the grammar doe! Dope lyrics I guess, flow was off though and the delivery wasn't very good.
Keep up fam, you got potential just need to work a lil bit.
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