damn look at that car from 1808 too.
Flow - 4/5: Flow was on point, but like Laudacitysaid, this seems like it would've been better chopped and screwed or something. the laid back flow, was perfect for the song, but just got boring to listen to, yk? If you decide to use this for a mixtape, mess with some chopping and screwing before you put it on there.
Lyrics - 4/5: I fucks with it. Nice switch up from your usual stuff, like Tupac said, you could've went a lot harder, but since this is out of your style, I like it. I can see you getting on some real deep shit when you continue making songs like this. "My father was a prophet 'cause this nigga called it, said I'm gonna fuck up. What I do? Fuck up. Second chance, don't waste it. told mama I'mma make it. 'yeah, that'll be the day, kid,' on her knees and prayed it." If the song was full of lyrics like that, it would've been a 5/5.
Overall - 4/5
Like this joint right here....flow was normal Poyo....I really like this one.....this the Poyo I like to here......DOPE Shit!
Mississippi x California x North Carolina
not bad man, but you should try to rap like on im on my g
tight as fuck. real shit