Austin Kathy - Come True

**AustinKathy** · 08-29-2012, 11:51 PM

Me:

http://soundcloud.com/austin-kathy/austin-kathy-come-true

everything done on garageband

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post956291

**ATLien666** · 08-31-2012, 12:20 AM

This shit is actually pretty dope, the chorus was surprisingly decent, but the "it's time to put in work now" part fucked it all up. Your flow isn't bad, but you have a very monotone voice, but it sounds like you try to work on it. The second verse was dope as fuck, but one thing you need to work on are your punchlines/metaphors/similes; a lot of them were, for lack of a better word, corny as fuck. The I seen the shit coming like I was too tall line is a great example. But you have talent and I thoroughly enjoyed this song, we should collab on some shit.

4/5

**AustinKathy** · 08-31-2012, 02:34 AM

hell ya man i definitely agree with you on some major parts. always progressing though! stay updated i got some cooler shit on the way i promise

**Young Corruption** · 08-31-2012, 03:38 AM

Flow: Pretty damn good. Not many slip ups at all and it fit the beat pretty good
Lyrics: the hook was not bad at all, a little more emotion and it could really pop. I liked the lyrics in all honesty. its a pretty good story telling type of song
Overall: I like this song. Its something I could bump to and just chill out with. Good work. I've get it a 3.5/5. The quality was good as well

**AustinKathy** · 08-31-2012, 07:59 AM

thanks man appreciate the love

**mykill** · 08-31-2012, 09:32 AM

Flow's not that bad. For garage band you did pretty well. Chorus needs some work. Not that the singing is horrible, just with lyrics. A little more energy and this could be pretty legit.

Overall: 3/5

**Cli-City** · 08-31-2012, 06:00 PM

Didn't like the effect on your voice too much...kinda fucked the entire up for me....the rapping made it a little better....Lyrics need some work....lyrics werent horrible but nothing grabbed my attention like yea this nigga is dope...Delivery and Flow is a little monotone but it didn't throw it off too much.....Imma keep an ear out when you don't have a song that has such an annoying ass beat..I like the Poker line though..lol...shit made me smirk...