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    Need help, trying to make a rap song.. i am a noob!

    This is just brain storming, i did on the buss.
    I see u every day, i see u on the train, i see your shiny hear like rain.
    I think abut u every day, i can never see an other way, got my eays locked on'ya beautiful face.
    I wish that one day, i could stop pray, pray that one day or the next day, Pray i'm in your eays, like even in your mind.
    I wish i was a thought, and that thought would make u smile, not just with your mouth, even with your eays.
    I wish that that day, is not to far away, i don't sit to far away, were hadding the same way.

    U always locked out, U never turned around, i could se reflection of your eays.. they shined.
    U are a dimond but u are priceles, cuz your shining brigthest, dam... i wish i could by this.

    I hope i am your friend, not just ignorant, i hope i'm not insane, thinking i could be your man, and stil your best friend and your best man. (this was not suposed to end like this, but i cant figure how to continue it)

    Hi i want to make a rap song about a girl, as u see i am not very good. I have no rhythm, and i can't sing. I started my brainstorm thinking it would be easy, the everything went bad... like rly "I wish that that day, is not to far away, i don't sit to far away, were hadding the same way." this together with almost every other line did not make any sence.

    i tried to make easy rymes, but it just sounded stupid. one of my problems is that i don't know how to make the beat, or the chorus. i tried to listen to some beats, but i found it rly hard to try and make a verse to the beat...

    So what i want U to do is give me some help, tell me how to make or find a beat, and a chorus. and tell me how the hell i make a rap verse, cuz i have no idea...

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    Wow i read what i just posted, it sounded so stupid... i rly hope someone can show me how to do this thing !

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    Think this through first buddy. Is it worth it? will she just see it as cheesy and weird? anyway if you do decide to go through with it and you want to make a full song just do 2 verses and a hook (chorus)(add another verse if you feel you need it). Now a verse is made up of 16 bars, a bar is 1 or 2 lines(i don't know much about it myself) and every line usually ryhmes etc etc, once you've written the 2 verses just think of a catchy hook. This will be kinda hard to do alone if you dont know what you're doing which by the sounds of it you dont so i personally don't recommend it. Even if you managed to write the song you still need some decent recording studio gear for it to sound any good, and you would have to find your own flow to rap (you can go with easy flows i guess that doesnt matter) and as for the beat you can just find them on youtube and download them.
    Wow i read what i just posted, it sounded so stupid... i rly hope someone can show me how to do this thing !
    I know what you mean, i would think that aswell if it was me. I can't really help much more this is all i can give i guess, just some advice.
    also for the brainstorming shit, the way i see it at first you think you can come out with something amazing but when you try to do it, its a lot harder than it seems, i've been there before.

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