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    This is not for wierdos

    Visual Art For "Livin Like That" a chilled song off my forthcoming project.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TeedaTeezy202 View Post
    Visual Art For "Livin Like That" a chilled song off my forthcoming project.
    FWM #ThaCarter



    Follow me on IG I'll follow you back @young202OG.
    If you're a dope artist send me some work lets make some shit.
    I hope y'all enjoy the video 100
    Ayo I'm a weirdo and I enjoyed it so title should be flagged for misleading info

    "how did I make it here" section flow is so perfectly simple, and the hook isn't instant but burrows in, props.

    Two small critiques though chief - Video takes a little long to get going for a new artist, I confess I skipped in after about 45 seconds because I was there for the music. That said you can tell you were enjoying putting production values into it and wanted to show it off haha. I've over-indulged myself like that at times so I get it, no hate. Also just on the Autotune front, because you have a mellow, laid back voice (which really suits the song btw), you could crank the Retune knob up to about 11 and it'd hit perfect. Maybe I'm being pedantic but there's a few little artificial 'vocal wobbles' even though your delivery is fine, and 90% of the time that's the Retune being set too low.

    All of that said my dude, left you a like and hope you drop more, an ear for flow can't always be taught and you have that naturally.

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